Leaving Melodrama

When Tim saw my scene with Ruby, I didn't think he was all that impressed and rightfully so. In hindsight I am honestly embarrassed to have thought of such a ridiculous idea. It was melodramatic, unrealistic, poorly acted (on my part) and quite frankly an atrocity, and I am so disappointed with myself for having thought of such a ludicrous idea, and I certainly thank Tim for his part in showing me that. It think my mentality behind that scene was to be different and to stand out, however in didn't realise that what I had thought of world instead stand out for all the wrong reasons, although I found some of Tim's direction confusing, it was all clever, meticulously worked out and a vast improvement on my abysmal performance.